Feedback: Blades upon Blades

[Kage]

So, I've been needing some feedback lately, mostly for Daichi, and have decided to make a new thread!

Not much to say, I have two characters I use, Krest and Daichi, but Daichi is the one I play the most. So say what you will! Ah need dat feedback.

[Holynexus]

Krest is cool, I guess I'll need to play more with him. Then agian I haven't really been here lately..ah well. Kreeva needs to meet Krest and plot together!

[Kage]

Still looking for more feedback! Still curious on Daichi himself and on the two fights so far posted here. Please can I have some?

[Kage]

Lets try that again shall we? Feedback aye?

[Xigo]

Daichi strikes me as an odd and bothersome character. He has this very strange sense of honor, in which him ambushing elves is totally fine, but the reverse is dishonorable for the elves. You seem to be trying to play the total badass with him, which is an architype I strongly dislike. And though I'm not sure how that was resolved, I'm not pushed on him apparently looking like a woman from a distance.

The character, in my eyes, is silly. I've no idea what inspired you to make a skinny orc blademaster, but my first thought is that it's an attempt to emulate samurai from anime. I made an entire post on my dislike for anime tropes and caricatures in roleplay. Regardless... he just bugs me.

[Kage]

Well. He's not meant to be badass what so ever. He believed for the longest time that in Ashenvale his people were in the right. His honor was simple. "The elves will attack and kill my people unless I kill them first." Not "Dude, so many elves I can kill and show off about." Though I never had him ambush elves. Save for Kalah that one time. Infact, most of the time it's elves who ambush him.

And he's meant to be a runt, not some skinny anime samurai. Perhaps the female was a bit much, but then again, orc females are quiet.. Manly to say the least. Woman may be too much, but the idea is that he went through all he could to be who he is, despite his lack of girth.

Sorry you feel that way, I'll see what I can do to fix it. Well, the honor part. His size and shape is what made him who he is. Runts exsist, and I'm proud on how he is.

[Kage]

Lets get some more feedback eh?