Feed me! Grems Feedback Thread!

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Well I finally got around to joining the band wagon, just tell me what you think and what I can improve on, things like the way I write, spelling, am I entertaining, etc.

My characters are:

-Saphorus: Power hungry Blood Elf.
-Rasiak: Loyal soldier of the Harbingers.
-Gremak: Honor guard for the Wutang..I mean Warsong Clan.
-Throgg: Your everyday average grunt of the Warsong Clan.
-Xaxo: Insane Forsaken, Plaguebringer.
-Ireth: Bounty Hunter.
-Mcgeady: Enjoys an adventure.
-Nathan: Young traveler.
-Glen: Gun slinging thug.
-Nixxel: Death Knight who lurks Tirisfal.

Thanks for replying(If you do) I'll be sure to give you some feedback of my own!

[grembomb]

Well I finally got around to joining the band wagon, just tell me what you think and what I can improve on, things like the way I write, spelling, am I entertaining, etc.

My characters are:

-Saphorus: Power hungry Blood Elf.
-Rasiak: Loyal soldier of the Harbingers.
-Gremak: Honor guard for the Wutang..I mean Warsong Clan.
-Throgg: Your everyday average grunt of the Warsong Clan.
-Xaxo: Insane Forsaken, Plaguebringer.
-Ireth: Bounty Hunter.
-Mcgeady: Enjoys an adventure.
-Nathan: Young traveler.
-Glen: Gun slinging thug.
-Nixxel: Death Knight who lurks Tirisfal.

Thanks for replying(If you do) I'll be sure to give you some feedback of my own!