MrCandlejack/Gatwazzak Feedback!

[MrCandlejack]

Soooooo.. I've never done this! But I've always been really curious, and I'm always open to some criticism and advice on whatever. Combat, grammar, sentence structure, the way my characters talk. I'd like to get some feedback so I can fix whatever. Or, you can tell me how awesome I am.

EITHER WAY

Characters I've actively RPed..
Mainly Gatwazzak, my Shaman Troll.

Run'gal, my new Pyremaster.. mainly Redwatch RP, but I've done some tavern RP and camp RP with him.

Vincetti, my pirate guy. Not so much active anymore, but whatever.

So, yes. Feel free to criticize, advise, or stroke my ego however you please. I CAN TAKE IT