12-06-2010, 12:41 PM
I apologize if posting this here is not acceptable. If that is the case please delete this post, and I apologize for the inconvenience.
I just finished writing my doorstopper of a profile, and decided to put it in the workshop for critique before submitting it for approval. I'd appreciate comments and criticism on the lore consistency, grammar, and cliche-status of it.
Antia scored a 5 on the Mary Sue Litmus Test, 11 without de-Suifiers.
The profile can be found here.
[EDIT![:]](https://www.conquestofthehorde.com/images/smilies/orc/orc2.gif ":]")
Bah, I'm just gonna put it up for approval. Feel free to comment on it if you like, anyway.
I just finished writing my doorstopper of a profile, and decided to put it in the workshop for critique before submitting it for approval. I'd appreciate comments and criticism on the lore consistency, grammar, and cliche-status of it.
Antia scored a 5 on the Mary Sue Litmus Test, 11 without de-Suifiers.
The profile can be found here.
[EDIT
Bah, I'm just gonna put it up for approval. Feel free to comment on it if you like, anyway.